DISCLAIMER: I don't really care if anyone else thinks that i'm wrong and wants to point out their own opinions, i'm very open to discussing what i believe to be the right move or response to a given situation. Anything i say about anyone's fighting is by any way a law of fighting, there are many ways to fight and my beliefs and my methods may not work for anyone but me. But i believe in my practices and if a critique is asked for i'll give the best constructive criticism as i can. I am not ragging on anyone or saying anything to be hurtful in anyway.
well the lack of wraps (and i understand the garage limitations) and i also understand the limited space makes you feet seem more heavy. so i won't address that stuff more then anyone else has.
the shield side hip wrap that you have some success with near the end of the video, when you move in for that or the right leg drop cross, instead of dipping with your legs and keeping your shoulders high you hunch an awful lot. so stand up straight. you are a tall guy so use that height and protect your shoulders and your arm.
Your shield work is pretty weak, especially with that punch. now i'm by no means a great punch shield fighter but you keep in to close to your body, extend that out there and cut off his angles of attack, kinda like for the same reasons a soccer goalie charges a break away. and you move it way to much to protect your legs. With that heater you are better, mostly because it's a strap, but you still move it alot, block from you hips and your core instead of your arms quite so much. On a side note, i'd say lower the strap on that heater about 3 inches. it will help protect your shoulder, and you won't have to maintain that hanging guard quite so much and you can let that guard turn into some arm-timing and pocketstabing. Just follow tin man back home, cause he is hunching too much too.
You do a very good job of not throwing worthless shots, but i don't think it wouldn't hurt you to get a little more committed to the shots you do through, you are a little too defensive and really let tin man set the tempo of the battle. If you start side stepping to either side (shield or weapon) you will cut off tin man's options, thus making his shots more predictable, and that will allow you to be able to be a little more aggressive.
Now Tin man favors that high cross alot, so you hold your weapon guard pretty high, so like i said i know why you favor so high but even thou the high cross is at least 40% of Tin man's shots i don't think you need to favor it quite so much. So with that said i think you should lower it, if you fight some one left handed or a flo fighter they are gunna harpoon you in the kidneys and gut like you can't believe. Like where you have your guard at 7:04 just before you throw that high cross and get killed for it
And there are many times in the vid where you have the pocket stab all set up, even if you don't know it, and you don't deliver it. you should be harpooning tinman down to his knees with his weapon side shoulder turned that much toward you. force him to use that weak weapon block for more then your high crosses.
and i agree with physic, be more aggressive with that shield.
I'm pretty pumped to fight you at opener =) and we can talk theory.