winfang already said alot of what i was writing up so i'll address the few things he didn't
-you both never really commit to any of your actions. the whole vid is kinda like half * fighting.
-both of you dance around a lot and have way to much movement withyour blocks and our shields
-bhakdar is better about this but aphex need to use core movements to block wrap shots, you use your arms too much which leaves you open to the next shot and dip with you knees to block your legs.
-Aphex you need to weapon block. put down your shield and fight single it'll change your game
-you both need to close and break range of your opponents better, you both kinda mosey. lunge, side step, hop-back when you are that close you don't wanna change up your feet so much. sometimes it right to change up your feet but usually only to set up a stab.
-you both high cross too much.
-aphex i would listen to winfang about the cone of defense. you will learn this more if you scaled down your shield and fought with something that's not so big. it will force you to cut down on waisted movement and focus on blocking high percentage shots.
-work on your stabs, it is a body movement not an arm movement.
-bhakdar your sword is too long
-Winfang also really hit it on the head with his first statement. its hard to critic something that just looks like play...
that's about all i got