Looks good so far. Nothing really negative about it, it looks pretty.
A few comments/suggestions/etc for you can be found below. I hope it helps some.
~Stash~
About us page:
Click here to view our current rules and tips for practices and fighting, or click here to see what makes the Disciples, THE Disciples.
Drop that down to separate lines:
View our current rules and tips for practices and fighting
hereSee what makes the Disciples,
THE Disciples.=linksForums:Add a "general chat" or something so everyone can post.
Make a link on the forums to go back to the page OR make the forum link open a new browser page.
Media gallery:Not bad, would be hard on a dial-up though.
Maybe put links to "Fighting at Home" "Red Harvest Invitational" etc so it pulls up thumbnails there instead of ALL of the thumbs for everything on one page.
Current Roster:Elebrim Mistblood & Ventus Aetherius
Can only click the name & not the picture as well: see the bio options for Cloral Orcanis and Animus Calesco
Creed:Helping each other is a huge part of who we are. Kindness, sincerity, patience, and eagerness are the key qualities that we would like see in our fellow fighters.
I THINK that part isn't in bold and the rest is.
It's personal preference, but I don't care for how the first line is in-dented one space. I'd do it the other way (every line except the first would be in-dented).
Practices:
Maybe put "Belegarth Book of War" and "Dagorhir Manual of Arms" since you do mention you are a cross-sport realm.
#3) specifics see below.
#4) "If you have any prior violent crime convictions, you will not be allowed at practice." How do you know and how do you watch this? It can be considered discrimination, if that's good or bad, I'm not sure. Maybe take that line out and leave the rest. Abuse can be physical or mental or emotional...but deciding where to draw the line can be hard, especially in this type of game where mental games are part of it and physical contact is allowed, weapon contact is required, and shield contact will happen.
Field rules:
#1) "Be in garb" - specify minimums. Even if it is: "refer to the BoW & MoA for garb rules"
#2) "others sick but also you" You have a double spaces between "sick" and "but" it actually looks like you missed a comma and stuck in an additional space.
#4) "when in doubt err on" add a comma: "when in doubt, err on"
General tips:
#1) "and avoid Charlie horses later on." change "Charlie horses" to cramps..since it can be any muscle.
#2) "some of us have no room to talk...me)" again...double space between "us" and "have"
#3) for period knee protection, suggest black or earth toned pads instead of neon green. Safety gear is one thing that doesn't HAVE to be period. You could suggest that the knee pads be worn under pants, skirts, etc.
Allies:
Dunland...Where is it? I don't want to search though their site to figure out where.
General:
I would move the forums option down to the 2nd from the bottom.
I would also move the "contact us" option down the the bottom.
This would put your allies option 3rd from the bottom.
Edited for formatting to make it easier to read.